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Reading Literary articles is one of my favorite literary websites. It scrutinizes manuscripts, comments and scores, announces awards, and recommends beautiful articles in a standardized and orderly manner, and has been well received by the majority of literary friends and experts. Years later, I submitted an article entitled "two different Spring Festival experiences" to the website, which was rated by the editor teacher 9. 9 points, and caused a lot of praise, the click rate of readers has reached 1000. I was happy about it for a long time. Encourage yourself to write every article attentively and strive to win the favor of readers and the recognition of experts.

In early April, I sent a prose of "Vision Flying and feeling full of Songjiang" to the website. I felt good about myself and estimated that there should be a better response. However, in the editor's message column, only teacher Liu Tongxian's comments were left: "to tell you the truth, this kind of prose, read again a few years later, has a sense of history between the lines." Unfortunately, there are few discerning eyes in reading Wenzhai! " . When I read this passage, my heart was full of emotion and my blood was boiling! Teacher Liu had a discerning eye, strongly supported this article, and spoke highly of it, and expressed regret and sigh for the article's lack of attention and praise. I was shocked by Mr. Liu's dedication and courage to speak and act. My heart is filled with deep gratitude and respect. I wanted to reply immediately to express my thanks, but after careful consideration, I decided that it would be more appropriate to have a written response.

Teacher Liu affirmed that the article "Vision Flying and feeling full of Songjiang" has a heavy sense of history between the lines. I think: this is an incisive and accurate comment and praise after carefully reading the works. As the author of this article, I have something to say and would like to analyze and study it. The majority of literary friends and teachers are expected to correct what is wrong.

"Vision Flying and feeling full of Songjiang" is not only the title of the article, but also the artistic conception of the article. The whole article is full of positive energy, and the length of more than 3000 words is filled with an article with a large capacity of subject matter.

At the beginning of the article, there are two foreshadowing and suspense: first, I would like to meet the person who invited me, how are the playmates of my youth doing now? Second, I want to see what is so good about the Shanghai Institute of Visual Arts, a university admired by young artists.

The whole article revolves around two lines. One is the macro thick line: the vision is flying. What does the Shanghai Institute of Visual Arts look like from a high starting point, informationized and newly built according to the standards of famous international art schools? The article takes the reader to the campus, to visit, to listen, to feel, to understand. With the advance and transformation of time and space, the appearance of the campus has gradually become clear: flowers and green grass; the magnificent "Eye Building", sculptures everywhere, gallery, black swans cruising in the clear lake, Huizhou-style architecture, "faculty home" for culture, leisure and entertainment, and so on. Students draw sketches in the scenery, 3D printing rooms, large canteens where teachers eat and eat, guests and hosts enjoy a free buffet, and so on. It does have characteristics and features that are different from those of ordinary famous schools.

The second is the micro fine lines, deep friendship. The exploration and perception of the world. This paper describes the deep feelings between the protagonist Dean Ye Ping and his former classmates and fellow villagers. It shows the harmonious relationship between Dean Ye and his colleagues, teachers and ordinary staff, as well as his unremitting feelings for art and interest in life: especially when he introduces to us the experience of witnessing and participating in the establishment, construction and development of the new school, joy and pride are expressed in words, from which we can see his unforgettable feelings for the college. What moved me in particular was that he was busy with his work and repeatedly told me to go to the college to chat, read books, read exhibitions and relax. I know. He's worried about me being lonely when I retire.

Dean Ye Ping is one of the administrators of the School of Design of Shanghai Institute of Visual Arts, a well-known professor of Fudan University in Shanghai, the leader of major national scientific research projects, the discipline leader of the top 100th QS University in the world, and a good leader and teacher in the eyes of teachers and students. He is intellectually affectionate and introverted. The Shanghai Institute of Visual Arts has a large number of such good teachers and leaders, which is the hope of national education. However, knowing his childhood experience, I understand that Ye Ping is a person with a story. All this is not enough to explain the heavy feeling of the article?

This article is natural and simple in language, sincere in emotion, scattered in structure and style, clear in level, clear in primary and secondary, combination of narration and discussion, blending of feelings and scenes. In the words of the editor of the "article reading network": "the article is vivid in language, rich in emotion, and makes readers imagine." When I say this, I'm afraid Lao Wang is bragging about selling melons. Fortunately, the online article is still there, interested literary friends and teachers might as well open it and have a look. You are especially welcome to put forward more valuable suggestions.

It needs to be added that although "reading the text" does not score and comment on this article, it is still conspicuous in the award-winning list of "visual flying feeling full of Songjiang". Didn't Mr. Liu's comments play a role?

"the article bar" reported my award information as soon as the article was published, and informed me to cash in the bonus (not much, just meaning). Of course, not every article can be successful. I have had a number of articles rejected in "Reading the text". As an amateur author, I am naturally not surprised by honor or disgrace, treat rationally and calmly, sum up experience, strengthen study, and improve constantly.

I think that the online literary world is not only a platform for the exchange and release of literary works, but also a position for academic discussion. The aim is to have a strong creative atmosphere, to improve the writing level and appreciation ability of writers and readers, so as to inspire more people to devote themselves to writing, to describe and praise the hot and happy life. I look forward to the early arrival of this day!

Shanghai, April 17, 2018